{"id":78,"date":"2015-10-06T19:36:31","date_gmt":"2015-10-06T19:36:31","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/?p=78"},"modified":"2015-10-06T19:36:31","modified_gmt":"2015-10-06T19:36:31","slug":"how-to-write-a-good-trick-ending","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/how-to-write-a-good-trick-ending\/","title":{"rendered":"How to write a good trick ending"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Some famous stories that have trick or twist endings are O. Henry&rsquo;s &ldquo;<a href=\"http:\/\/americanenglish.state.gov\/files\/ae\/resource_files\/1-the_gift_of_the_magi_0.pdf\" target=\"_blank\">The Gift of the Magi<\/a>,&rdquo; Shirley Jackson&rsquo;s &ldquo;<a href=\"http:\/\/www.loa.org\/images\/pdf\/Jackson_Charles.pdf\" target=\"_blank\">Charles<\/a>,&rdquo; and Ambrose Bierce&rsquo;s &ldquo;<a href=\"http:\/\/fiction.eserver.org\/short\/occurrence_at_owl_creek.html\" target=\"_blank\">An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge<\/a>.&rdquo;<\/p>\n<figure style=\"width: 212px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"\" src=\"http:\/\/i.ytimg.com\/vi\/YNZquUneyTE\/hqdefault.jpg\" alt=\"Magi\" width=\"212\" height=\"159\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-caption-text\">The ending of &ldquo;The Gift of the Magi&rdquo; is pretty unexpected, but it&rsquo;s meaningful in the context of the story.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>People love it when&nbsp;stories trick them.<\/p>\n<p>Or do they?<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes when people read stories that have a trick ending, they get mad. They feel like they&rsquo;ve been cheated.&nbsp;Why?<\/p>\n<p>Here are some rules to think about when you are tempted to write a trick ending:<\/p>\n<p><strong>#1: A trick ending has to be justified by what comes before<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>What does that mean? If&nbsp;your trick ending comes out of nowhere, people will get mad. They want you to sprinkle clues throughout the story so that when they&nbsp;get to the trick ending,&nbsp;they feel like they were somewhat prepared for it.<\/p>\n<p><strong>#2: A trick ending can&rsquo;t be obviously coming<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>If people know it&rsquo;s coming, it&rsquo;s not a good trick ending and they will probably just be annoyed. You have to walk that line between giving them enough information and&nbsp;giving them too much.<\/p>\n<p><strong>#3: A trick ending should mean something<\/strong><\/p>\n<figure style=\"width: 239px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"\" src=\"https:\/\/dcairns.files.wordpress.com\/2012\/01\/vlcsnap-2012-01-07-13h42m48s74.png\" alt=\"Owl Creek Bridge\" width=\"239\" height=\"179\"\/><figcaption class=\"wp-caption-text\">We get all sorts of clues in &ldquo;Owl Creek Bridge&rdquo; that what we&rsquo;re being told is not real.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>A good trick ending gives the reader a deeper understanding of what really happened in the story:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>In O. Henry&rsquo;s story, the trick ending shows us that people don&rsquo;t always think of the consequences of making sacrifices for others.<\/li>\n<li>In Bierce&rsquo;s story, we learn how fierce the will to live can be, even when it&rsquo;s clear that all is lost.<\/li>\n<li>Jackson tells us the most&nbsp;about the mother narrating the story in&nbsp;the last short line than she did in the rest of the story.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><strong>Try it yourself!<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>Trick endings can be really fun to write, but don&rsquo;t be discouraged if your readers tell you that you didn&rsquo;t get it right the first time. To write a really effective trick ending, writers often rework the story over and over until they get it just right!<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Some famous stories that have trick or twist endings are O. Henry&rsquo;s &ldquo;The Gift of the Magi,&rdquo; Shirley Jackson&rsquo;s &ldquo;Charles,&rdquo; and Ambrose Bierce&rsquo;s &ldquo;An Occurrence at Owl Creek Bridge.&rdquo; People love it when&nbsp;stories trick them. Or do they? Sometimes when people read stories that have a trick ending, they get mad. They feel like they&rsquo;ve &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/how-to-write-a-good-trick-ending\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">How to write a good trick ending<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"episode_type":"","audio_file":"","podmotor_file_id":"","podmotor_episode_id":"","cover_image":"","cover_image_id":"","duration":"","filesize":"","filesize_raw":"","date_recorded":"","explicit":"","block":"","_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[2],"tags":[],"series":[],"class_list":["post-78","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-writing"],"aioseo_notices":[],"episode_featured_image":false,"episode_player_image":"https:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2025\/04\/KidsLearn-UseYourTools.jpg","download_link":"","player_link":"","audio_player":false,"episode_data":{"playerMode":"dark","subscribeUrls":{"apple_podcasts":{"key":"apple_podcasts","url":"https:\/\/podcasts.apple.com\/us\/podcast\/ksqd-talks-music\/id1703111686","label":"Apple Podcasts","class":"apple_podcasts","icon":"apple-podcasts.png"},"rss":{"key":"rss","url":"https:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/feed\/podcast","label":"RSS","class":"rss","icon":"rss.png"},"spotify":{"key":"spotify","url":"https:\/\/open.spotify.com\/show\/7DuOuT1jXWSctSexcdC97s","label":"Spotify","class":"spotify","icon":"spotify.png"},"tunein":{"key":"tunein","url":"https:\/\/tunein.com\/radio\/KidsLearn-p3854634\/","label":"TuneIn","class":"tunein","icon":"tunein.png"},"youtube":{"key":"youtube","url":"https:\/\/www.youtube.com\/watch?v=mECGrb_UsoA&list=PLhcbiKBzJvJLnU2R4q1eSNuE_jBTCm6Iu","label":"YouTube","class":"youtube","icon":"youtube.png"}},"rssFeedUrl":"https:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/feed\/podcast\/kidslearn","embedCode":"<blockquote class=\"wp-embedded-content\" data-secret=\"kqrLuruZji\"><a href=\"https:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/how-to-write-a-good-trick-ending\/\">How to write a good trick ending<\/a><\/blockquote><iframe sandbox=\"allow-scripts\" security=\"restricted\" src=\"https:\/\/sukiwessling.com\/kidblog\/how-to-write-a-good-trick-ending\/embed\/#?secret=kqrLuruZji\" width=\"500\" height=\"350\" title=\"&#8220;How to write a good trick ending&#8221; &#8212; KidsLearn\" data-secret=\"kqrLuruZji\" frameborder=\"0\" marginwidth=\"0\" marginheight=\"0\" scrolling=\"no\" class=\"wp-embedded-content\"><\/iframe><script>\n\/*! 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